short story from 9th grade

Part 1
It's snowing! It's snowing, every thing was cover by a layer of white, what a beautiful and peaceful sight =D. Until, my bother and me start the snowball fight, in our backyard
"Here catch it,” he shout, he throw the giant snow ball way high toward the sky."
OH my god it's to warding me! Better run, and run as fast as I can. Is it my illusion? The snowball seems to following me! o.O I hide behind the biggest rock I could find, to protect me self from getting hit.
Great!! The snowball didn't hit me, but it hit the rock and turns into avalanche. My beautiful long straight hair and my shoulder was cover with pieces of snow. (Some of the snow went inside my coat... Frizzing X( )
"How is my ice-cream tease? Better when it's winter right?" he said it with carefree laugh. XD
"Pretty good" ^^; Garr "in return I'll made u giantgantic ice-cream and it's free!” I yell. XO
"Ha, ha, bring it on, like u could make one hahhaha."XD XD XD all of sudden I felt there fire ball inside me even the snow melt by my anger.
" You’ll see if I could or not." when I start to make my snowball, I realize there was a snowball seems already made beside me...terrific!
I throw the snowball using my full energy. But ... but wait a second, did that ball move a little? And feel much softer than the snowball, and some part it have a little bit of furry feel. Don't tell me it's alive, or maybe I throw some kind of animal that I mistake it as snowball! I knew things couldn't go so smoothly.
"Brother! Catch it, catch it, it's alive" I shout as loud as I can, to make sure he gets my message. Oh my god pleases save it.
"I am not idiot, to just stand and wait to get hit! Beside don't you see I been chasing by this weirdo snowball? I can't even stop running how do you expect me to catch it?" He screams XO.
" Now you know how I feel? That what you deserve." I laugh. XD
"shu...t op!" he trip and fall on the stair. Xp Which he was originally plans to hide in the house from snowball. For some reason the snowball was land on his back, I mean right on top of his back!
I laugh louder this time, really loud that even the neighborhoods could hear me; but I couldn't help it, because I finally see my brother suffering and usually I'm the one.

Part 2
When we, I mean I carry the snowball, um I mean it* home and worm it up and keep it in a worm blanket. We try different method to weak it up and finally it work. We both wait and can't wait what it* going to be. Fist come up a pair of long ear, then show out it's fluffy short tail, it stretch a little and open it's big cute eye and look at us enigmatical it's a...
"Bunny? I though was some thing cool, a animal that I have never see before, what a waste of time.” my bother complains.
"No, not just a bunny, some how I think there's something special about this bunny. Yes it's completely white, see even the palms was white." I hug it up and check if I could find anything special. " It’s supper soft, it's eye look kind of dead, but still isn’t she/he looks cuter than any regular rabbits? Don't you think? Wait a minute there's a small mark in it's ear, isn’t white, it's shape look like a hea...rt." Before I could finish my sentence my bother pinch the rabbit's ear and cover the mark. He yells at the bunny. "It's all your fault to make me fall! You gonna pay for it!"
I hit his hand and save the pool little bunny from his torture and start laughing again. He just remind me the weird pose he made when the bunny land on his back.
" Grrr, what do you laughing about? He asks with anger. "Nothing." but still couldn't stop giggle ling. X)
"Look, sis, look the rabbit's eye turn into blue! He point at it. "Yap, that's weird, it was complete black second ago, and now it looks more alive! I told you, there's something special about the bunny."
"Ya, ya, what ever, sis I'm hungry go get something for me to eat, milk and cookie." he commands me as always.
"o.O what's that sound? Do you make that sound?"
"Hi, I'm hungry, but not that hungry that my stomach would make sound, to complain me that I haven't feed it for long time. I think it's coming from the rabbit. He explains. "Can a bunny even made that sound? Alright I'll get something for both of you." I bring the bunny with me incase. You know what.
"Let see, what we got in the refrigerator, hope I'll find carrots or some vegetable that you can eat, Oh there's the cookie and milk that my bother ask for, it's his favor ^^." I use one arm hold the bunny and the cookie and use the other hand to hold the milk and keep searching for the bunny's food. 5 minute past still find none. Maybe the bunny could drink the milk. I pull the milk into a milk bottle, when I want to feed the little bunny it was gone! Where could it be? Then I feel the cookie bag in my arm wriggle a little. When I look inside, the bunny is in there seems to enjoy the cookies; can a bunny eat cookie o.o?
I take it out from the bag and hug it again. Oh my god it ate the whole bag! =O Umm great still has one left, so I eat the last 1. Then I start to feed the rabbit with milk and feed my self too.
" What on earth, taking you so long? Where’s my cookies and milk?" He talks with anger deep voice, when he looks at the ground see the cookie with only jacket left, and the empty milk bottle. He looks at me with the evil suspicious eyes. From my past experience something bad is going to happen." The bunny eat it all, the bunny!" I grab the bunny and point at its mouse that full of cookie dregs. Hope he'll believe me. " But you eat it too, right?" He looks down at me like mighty god look down at guilty child.
A minute latter he finally speaks again " never mind, I'll go out side and buy my self some food." he's voice was much calmer, but my heart was not. He slam the door, I am relived.
“ Yay! He’s gone now, little bunny you don’t have to be scare anymore.” The little bunny is sleeping peacefully in my arm, um… I guess I’m the only one who was scare. ^^; Trust my brother could be a devil when he’s really agree, guess this time he just went easy on me...
“Oh little bunny, little bunny you’re so cute, you’re so soft, look like cotton candy or maybe marshmallow.” I feel like eating it…. Readers don’t worry I wont ^^
“Don’t worry little bunny, you could stay at my home, my parents wont be back for at least a month. They went to honeymoon for their 13 anniversaries. They usually brought me with them, but this time no T.T; it’s all because of my brother. (Author explain: actually was because the brother and sister ague too much, their parent want at least peace of quiet when they going to the trip.) Why does my parent have to give birth to him? Every thing would be so much better with out him right?” I look at the bunny. I was brushing its hair while I talked to it.
The bunny was shivering. I realize the bunny was much smaller than what I expected it to before came out of the snow, it’s only a little bigger than my hand, and it sure is little. “That thick layer of ice must make you freeze, here, here” I add a blanket and hug it, hope this way I can keep it worm and stop it from shivering.
I keep talking to the bunny, even though it might not understand; but I need someone to talk to, express my feeling, and tell my story, especially in a big house by my self. “I’m only 12, I look mature, right? At such young age, I’m already taking the responsibility of the house (only when their parents are gone), I take care of my self and my brother as well, amazing, am I? (Author explains: parent did hire a nanny before they left. But the girl fires the nanny, because she wants to keep the money for her self.) My brother was only six. He’s six years apart from me, that why we argue a lot (author explain: According to the Chinese Zodiac, you totally don’t get along with someone who’s six year apart from you and worst match too.) I hate share with him, we always fight over little things such as what Channel to watch, who should us the computer, who own the new toy… and I always have to let him, because I’m older. I hate it; I hate to take care of him. He always commands me and tells me what to do and I’m OLDER! I hate to have a brother.”
The bunny look at me, and lick my hand seem it understand my situation. “Aw I wish my brother was sweet like you.” It licks and licks and than it start to bite my hand… “TT.TT I guess u just hungry” very disappointed. “… Okay then, I’ll go out and buy some carrot for you, let me find my wallet first.” After a while of searching. “ Yay, I found it! Who leave it one the computer desk? Oh well who cares…. Wait a minute I lost 200 dollar… my brother must took it, no wander… I knew something bad going to happen. Sign TT.TT